the writing is a very cleche but it's all about the animation, which is good even by today's standards.
haven't these fucks who come in and say that your copying people ever heard of inpiration or influence. you can't just come up with a style that's amazing on a whim. you have to take influence and build upon it.
but about your cartoon. it's pretty good, but you could improve on your consistency outside of comically switching between realistic and cartoony horses.
quality animation and voice work, but for some reason, when ever ash or pikachu spoke and during the last few seconds, I suddenly got really, really mad. It was still steller animation and voice work, but i couldn't get myself to enjoy it. oh well, don't see a reason to penalize you for something i can't explain... yep
welp, can't beat that. ffffffffff---
this is now my wall paper
well...this now my wallpaper...
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